Butterfly

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Written September 9, 2023
For The Contest, “Pleiades”“
(Albatross, Butterfly, Clouds, or Daffodil)
Sponsor, Joseph May

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Beneath the oak tree limb- Bound, lies a gray cocoon; Bright, new transformation Becoming freshly wrought. Birthed from a furry worm, Butterfly wings take flight- Bestow transcending view.

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Sam Scott

Date: 9/14/2023 5:12:00 AM

Sandra this is delightful in it's perfection and observation, "Birthed from a furry worm" made me smile :-))

Emilia James

Date: 9/12/2023 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Sandra. Emilia : )

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/12/2023 7:54:00 AM

Sandra, I like how you started from the very beginning until a butterfly is born. Great pleiades! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Terry Miller

Date: 9/12/2023 1:03:00 AM

Brilliant; congratulations.

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2023 6:04:00 AM

Very nicely done Sandra, Congrats on your win