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Burnt Raspberries

Burnt raspberries. There I've said it. The words collided In my mind until A perfect jam appeared. That's what you get, She said, For being so unrestrained. Yet I never thought it so. At the time it was Just another merger, Another pairing, Like two who mate And swirl in a dance. The dance of life Is all it takes To make jam.

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Date: 8/15/2019 12:18:00 PM
Very cool poem. Like the progression of it.
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Date: 11/30/2018 10:04:00 AM
Love it :)
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Bill Yates
Date: 11/30/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you.

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