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Burning Sage

Burning Sage I’m burning sage in our domain to disinfect a lost refrain a love that faltered in our past a love I thought would alway last my prideful mien to conquer thee My lustful ways were not to be for pride will go before the fall reflecting I will wear a shawl to comfort me as was your love the burning essence will prevail I praise you as the God above a love of peace, a mourning dove Best New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet December 2, 2019

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Date: 2/17/2020 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Paula.
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Date: 2/16/2020 10:34:00 PM
I have heard burning sage can be healthy. I have never tried it. Enjoyed this write. Have a good day.........
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 2/17/2020 8:36:00 AM
Date: 2/1/2020 5:47:00 PM
What a beautiful flow to your rhyme Ralph, hope you are keeping well, sending you my best wishes:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2020 3:25:00 PM
There are times I take out my husband's old bottle of Aramis or even an incense that reminds me of my college debate partner. Scents can bring us relaxation. A beautiful poem, Ralph. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/1/2020 5:49:00 PM
Ooh Aramis just the word conjures up the scent in my brain.. oh i loved that aftershave too:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/10/2020 6:44:00 PM
Beautiful Ralph! New year blessings my friend! : ) xxoo
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 1/11/2020 9:49:00 AM
Hi Connie And thank you for your comment. I hope you had a great NEW YEAR!
Date: 12/17/2019 8:43:00 AM
This has great flow and is beautifully rendered. Blessings forChristmas Ralph. Thanks for your visit.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/19/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Rick
Date: 12/16/2019 2:59:00 PM
Wonderful poem. To have loved and lost is a great though painful growth opportunity. Have a great day my friend.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/19/2019 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Hattie
Date: 12/1/2019 3:28:00 PM
I enjoyed this lyrical poem of lost love, Ralph. I think you left off the T of thought in line four.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/2/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! I corrected it
Date: 12/1/2019 2:01:00 PM
great rhythm and flow to this beautiful write... beautifully penned and a joy to read :) hugs (soupmail)
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 12/2/2019 8:46:00 AM
Thank you, SANDRA!

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