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Brown Sugar

**Double Acrostic** ****Brown Sugar**** Bourbon complexion small tight frame, fancy. Rhythm sensual, untamed yet so classy. Overall a perfect ten, infectiously sassy! Wily this temptress, like the modern day Nefertiti, I kneel before this empress Sweet never sour, passionate to the core. Understanding, we've built a strong rapport. Glamorous, she is everything and more. Her Alluring imperfections most impressive. Rapturous, I yearn for her defection! Jared Pickett 8/4/2014 Asavvy1

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Date: 1/19/2023 6:26:00 PM
"Sweet never sour, passionate to the core- Alluring imperfections most impressive.." She sounds like a dream come true. This is beautiful, romantic and loving. From the heart. You need to hold onto her and never let go. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 8/15/2014 6:41:00 PM
You are the romantic and your poems in with romantic content are awesome! Enjoyed... Verlena
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Date: 8/10/2014 9:28:00 AM
I feel a guy who is in love..lost in love indeed enough to find imperfections alluring.I can feel a heartbeat in your wanton words Jared.
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Date: 8/4/2014 9:09:00 PM
She must be amazing.
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Jared Pickett
Date: 8/6/2014 11:30:00 PM
Very much so!! ;jp)

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