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Broken Shadows

Unrecognizable Her face once the harborage of beauty Unblemished Soft, alabaster skin Cheeks heirs of royalty, Lips, the essence of rose Blue eyes More profound than the sea A never-ending smile Serenaded my heart Tonight Her face, Unrecognizable Eclipsed by the ravages of Hell’s Dust Her addiction hides behind the Broken Shadows Beneath her brutal eyes Lost colors Reveal endless abuse Her cheeks transformed Now, shallow hills Decry lost royalty Once ruby lips Cracked and bloodied Divulge unspoken lies She was once All of me My purpose My wisdom My love Unrecognizable Her smile forever lost Behind the Broken Shadows

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Date: 6/15/2021 7:05:00 PM
So powerfully written, Jim. I like the repetition of key words: "blue eyes" to "brutal eyes." The physical transformation from addiction is precisely etched in image. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 6/4/2021 5:58:00 PM
Even if this piece might be fictitious, the strength and sadness in the emotions expressed are very real. A very evocative excellent poem Jim Hirtle!...ab
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Date: 6/4/2021 1:50:00 PM
A touching write on an horrific affliction.
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