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Broken Horses

We long for relationships that know no borders, in which hearts can roam free, frolicking with each other, and galloping at will through fields and streams in broad daylight, and spontaneous affections can nuzzle unrestrained. Yet on our humble ranch, it is the broken horses that we so often ride. Connections become curtailed that once headed for the horizon, by trial and error taught to shield certain wounds and mind necessary fences, in many a peculiar pasture.

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Date: 3/27/2015 11:10:00 PM
great metaphor here....we keep the fences repaired on those we care about, SuZ
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Date: 2/2/2015 6:07:00 PM
G'day Carol... I guess we are all expected to conform like 'broken horses' in the system these days. Very nice poem Carol. Lindsay
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Carol Mays
Date: 2/3/2015 1:10:00 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. I've enjoyed your poems, also. Carol
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Carol Mays
Date: 2/3/2015 1:10:00 AM
Thanks, Lindsay. I've enjoyed your poems, also. Carol
Date: 1/28/2015 11:23:00 AM
Very beautiful pen Carol! A 7 from me!Enjoyed your reading your excellent piece, wow! so much truth about it and some so sad, my dear friend!:) Love and hugs! Xxxx D. ^O^"
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Date: 2/3/2015 1:15:00 AM
Thanks, Dorian. I'm glad you liked the poem. I commented on one of your poems, also. Carol

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