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Broken Angel----

fear encompasses me and i am left forsaken, drowning in the taste of yesterday’s regret- i’ve loved and lost midnight stars, been shadowed by remorse for what i did not do. so why do i even try? what is left of me cannot be saved and all not forgotten will never be forgiven. i feel the moon stumbling upon my dreams, sense the magic of death when i’ve lost my way. for i shall see no more of you- i shall not be given a reason to hate; you’ve given me the woe of a thousand tears, given anxious thoughts that lead to scars. but my scars are shared with many, they all feel my sorrow and hold me tight- i’ve seen the way they look at me, like a broken angel longing for the light.

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Date: 7/27/2023 1:11:00 PM
Magic of death? In any case those last two lines are awesome luloo
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Date: 1/4/2023 10:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this. Meanwhile, by God's grace, I greet you with the peace and joy from the Lord toward a prosperous New Year 2023 along this present: "the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
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Date: 12/3/2022 7:18:00 AM
A gripping poem, Lu loo, missing you very much:)
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Date: 9/20/2022 9:38:00 PM
A sad write and very true about not forgetting is to never forgive… :)
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