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Brilliant Bluebird

A bluebird sits in the old pine tree, dressed in blue for the jubilee. He plumps his feathers for the show, (he's an absolute Romeo.) He hears the other birds complain, But Bluebird's there to entertain. He ignores the jealous looks, his name will be in storybooks. Bluebird's soft lilt and rolling sway, All of nature wants to stay. To listen to his graceful song, he wants you to come along. He's the star of this bird show, (he's an absolute Romeo.)

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Date: 1/30/2016 6:27:00 AM
Sounds like bluebird is not so blue... nice poem!!!
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Robyn Campbell
Date: 1/30/2016 9:08:00 AM
Thanks for reading. Bluebird is a Romeo. :-)
Date: 1/2/2016 8:10:00 PM
l just love the sing-songy rhyming rythym you've penned in Brilliant Bluebird. It just bumped my mood up a notch! Toni O.
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Robyn Campbell
Date: 1/2/2016 9:29:00 PM
Haha, glad to have bumped your mood up. Thanks for saying such kind words.
Date: 12/28/2015 3:46:00 AM
such a romantic that Brilliant bluebird.. I wonder if he's the one serenading me... Awesome write. SKAT
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Robyn Campbell
Date: 12/28/2015 9:01:00 AM
Haha, he might be the one, SKAT. He is romantic. And so handsome. :-)

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