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Brewing Storm

clouds cover the moon thunder shatters the silence - frightened baby cries 09 MAY 2015 Kim Patrice Nunez

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Sneha Rv

Date: 5/15/2015 10:00:00 AM

This is lovely! .. Nowadays there are a lot of storms and disasters in many places.. :(

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/11/2015 1:44:00 AM

U pictured the hurricane in a superb way, in brevity too! Kudos! Oh poor sweet baby. Stay safe pal. Take care. Great to read frm u again.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/11/2015 12:40:00 AM

Kim I enjoyed your wording and how you put these together to give it an earthly quality and a realalistic flare, it also has a haunting quality to it love the last two words baby cries, nice final touch that fits just right to this work, cheri

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/10/2015 9:47:00 PM

Oooooh I love it, and I can feel it! Fantastic!! Always, Laura

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/10/2015 2:18:00 PM

we have a new one bit didn;t hit manila.. thank God!.. well done 'ku, kim... ganda!.. huggs

Skat A

Date: 5/10/2015 11:44:00 AM

Kim, enjoyed the haiku. Hugs *SKAT*

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/10/2015 11:28:00 AM

It appears there are two storm fronts, inside and outside.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/10/2015 5:39:00 AM

- I do not like thunder me either - strong natural forces - A superb haiku, Kim! - I wish you a beautiful Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/9/2015 11:04:00 PM

OH....so sorry to hear about the imminent danger to the Philippines, dear. I hope you and your loved ones will be safe. This is a tremendous write....loved the ending. Thanks for your visits to my work. Hugs

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/9/2015 11:02:00 PM

Great haiku Kim... the last line i too good... or should i say the last two words... such a strong effect... #7

Nandita Das

Date: 5/9/2015 9:24:00 PM

Excellent haiku. A pleasure to read....7

Lei Strauss

Date: 5/9/2015 8:05:00 PM

-slow clap- Wow ate Kim! Cool imagery :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/9/2015 7:19:00 PM

I will be praying for safety for everyone there Kim. Your haiku contains an impactful last word that adds such depth to your poem. 7

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/9/2015 5:52:00 PM

My lil girl and husband can sleep through anything but I'm up at the first bang of thunder. I enjoyed your haiku sweetie hugsxx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/9/2015 5:20:00 PM

excellent Kim...oh I was unaware of this storm...I am praying for all...be safe Tim

David Meade

Date: 5/9/2015 5:17:00 PM

a beast of a storm breaking the rule . . . Never wake a sleeping baby!! I loved the twist at the end. Well done Ms. Nunez 7

David Meade
Date: 5/9/2015 5:31:00 PM

I am honored my dear -- I am called Storm Chaser, I do like a good storm but only if no one is hurt. I will be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers . . . be safe. I will keep my eye on Dodong. Hugs

Brenda Rose

Date: 5/9/2015 5:17:00 PM

Great imagery, so much said in just three lines. Thank you