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Brevity Muse - Cl

for you are my BREVITY MUSE, the deep metaphors i searched for- the rhythm to your heart i shan’t lose, (love, it’s your verses i adore) coalesced by the vows we swore under the autumn crimson hues- depth of my rhyme you did restore… for our bodies and souls did fuse _______________________________ 1.26.20 Oh-No A Twisted Char-Lay Poetry Contest Charles Messina

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Date: 2/16/2020 10:30:00 AM
LuLoo, beautiful job painting within the 8x8 canvas constraints. I love "the rhythm to your heart i shan’t lose". I shall have to meet your brevity muse someday, lol! Congrats on #1 ~ John
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Date: 2/16/2020 9:29:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Lu Loo. You did an awesome job writing this gem. Congrats on your 1st place win! Charlie
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Date: 1/26/2020 1:39:00 PM
This is so lovely and I love te way you work out the theme in "brevity." Good luc in the contest!
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2020 9:30:00 AM
thank you dear Sam! keyboards can be so sneaky...lol x:-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/27/2020 9:30:00 AM
thank you dear Sam! keyboards can be so sneaky...lol x:-)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 1/26/2020 1:40:00 PM
Seems my keyborad has objections to "the" and "luck."

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