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Breeze

Follow if you're bold enough to wander wild and free I will take you where your jaded heart has always longed to be
Taken from the poem "Summer Breeze - Mystery" written July 6, 2016 YOUR BEST RHYMING COUPLET #3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L MILTON HANKINS

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Date: 10/18/2021 6:41:00 PM
Dear Francis, I adore the vivacious spirit of your exquisite couplet. My heart’s imagination is truly enchanted. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/21/2021 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. ...Fran
Date: 10/18/2021 11:58:00 AM
such touching lines Francis, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/21/2021 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Jan. ...Fran
Date: 10/18/2021 9:22:00 AM
Hi Fran, Congratulations on your win in the contest; poignant indeed. Blessings, Paulette
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/21/2021 5:44:00 AM
Thank you, Paulette. ...Fran
Date: 10/18/2021 7:06:00 AM
Love this Francis. Congrats on your win with this beauty ~
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:47:00 AM
Hi, Line. Thank you. ...Fran
Date: 10/18/2021 5:33:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:46:00 AM
Thanks, Beata. God bless you, lovely lady. ...Fran
Date: 10/17/2021 11:49:00 PM
Great writing. Congratulations!
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Christural. ...Fran
Date: 10/17/2021 8:17:00 PM
Francis, I offer my congratulations for your fine placement in my recent couplet contest. I thoroughly enjoyed your couplet. Out of fifty entries, this is a wonderful placement.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, Milton. And also, a sincere thanks for hosting these fine contests. ...Fran
Date: 10/10/2021 3:02:00 AM
Wow.. That's lovely! Well penned.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:37:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Paghunda. ...Fran
Date: 10/8/2021 10:35:00 AM
Wonderful. how does he choose among so many well written couplets I see here all the time? Yours right at the top for me among them.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:34:00 AM
Hi, Andrea... thank you. Wow, there are so many really good poets here. I often feel like the kid that got to first base with a dribbler to right field! ...Fran
Date: 10/8/2021 4:22:00 AM
You are quite an accomplished poet, I like your words.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 10/18/2021 8:28:00 AM
Hello, Rose... thank you very much! ...Fran

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