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Breath the Air

There are no secrets in life but hidden truth that lies beneath the surface. My habit of telling myself that if only this or that thing were different I could leave suffering behind me than all could go well. I think we know ourselves better than we actually do, thinking we won`t feel guilty when we discover our true nature. If not I will continue to a stage of agonizing surrounded by things which could delight me at the time. If only I saw them in the right way if only I can learn to appreciate them so as to be able to continue to breath the air and feel the wind. I want happiness, I want to be in love and become very passionate, although I still feel overwhelmed by remorse over my past. I ask myself, why must I have that special talent of making myself miserable when i know that I cannot eliminate suffering, I must try to change the things that causes me that pain. I Will Very Soon Terry 16/9/2018

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Date: 11/26/2018 10:51:00 AM
Learning to put the past behind is a hard thing for all of us. But take each day and make it the best that we can. Pull the positive out and try to leave the negative behind. love phyl.
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Date: 10/28/2018 7:07:00 AM
I have read two of your poems so far, and I am FAVing this one also. I love the way you think and feel, and express your heart, Therese.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/31/2018 12:31:00 AM
Hi Caren, I am so so happy that you are giving me heartfelt reviews that are so sincere and warm coming from you. You give me so much happiness, as this is what i need today, and thinking about you tomorrow. I will want so much to know you better by reading your poems which i will do gradually soon. Thank again. Much love Terry xoxo
Date: 10/24/2018 11:10:00 AM
Hey, the past also teaches us a lot about what not to repeat in the present. The world would be a much better place if people could learn from history including personal experience. You do not have to punish yourself for the past. The past cannot be changed, so it's OK to give yourself a break.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 10/31/2018 12:28:00 AM
Hi Duke, yes i know you are so right, but my past has so ugly things that happened to me, they pop up and they take me down, only for a while. I usually if you notice, my poems are what i feel today, what i feel about my past, and i hope for the tomorrow. We will share more about me and at the same time i want to discover you from your poems. Thank you so much. Love Terry xoxo
Date: 9/24/2018 12:35:00 AM
Another heart felt piece. I am not in the habit of promoting my book here but I think our backgrounds may be somewhat similar. Check out my website www.wisedummypoet.com there is a link to my ebook. If you don’t have an ereader soup mail me and I can arrange to send you a physical copy.
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Therese Bacha
Date: 9/27/2018 9:54:00 PM
I went to your website and read and looked at it. Very nice and elegant. Unfortunately my sickness is a little bit affecting my brain, i forget easily, i hope its nothing worse. But i remember liking a lot what i read and what i saw. Thank you for your review to. Love Terry xoxo

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