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No more coats and woolen mittens. It's a time of new beginnings, when a dormant world awakens from Winter's slumber. Thawing snow becomes dancing brooks, quenching the thirst of Mother Earth. Birds feather their nests, trees bud anew, flowers open to bloom, and so does the love within my heart. The breath of Spring gives me reason to sing as I confess my love for you. Clear are the frosted window panes of glass. Winter coats and mittens are stored away. Visible are the blades of fresh green grass, As I feast my eyes on this sweet Spring day. Daffodils bloom, buds burst on maple trees. Trickling streams flow to a raging river. A songbird's sweet trills waft upon the breeze I thank Spring for being such a giver. My heart also sings of love now unbound, But I would be guilty and thus remiss, If to you, the one my dear heart has found, I'd not bestow upon your lips, our first kiss. I find it hard to breathe on this Spring day. Because you have taken my breath away.

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Date: 4/2/2024 5:19:00 AM
Lin, your seasonal Sonnet burst forth of Spring's magnificent imagery and soothe my soul! A lovely read this morning! A marvelous poet you are! Happy Tuesday!
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you for such lovely remarks, Mike.
Date: 4/1/2024 2:41:00 AM
Beautiful poetry :)
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Art.
Date: 3/31/2024 2:35:00 PM
Lin, beautifully romantic.
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Tania.
Date: 3/29/2024 4:23:00 PM
Really beautiful, Lin. Looks like it isn’t only the daffodils that are blooming. Have a great weekend, my friend.
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:07:00 AM
Thank you very much for your thoughts.
Date: 3/29/2024 4:19:00 PM
Such a romantic sonnet--it left me breathless. I especially liked "Daffodils bloom, buds burst on maple trees. Trickling streams flow to a raging river." Your imagery was 'delicious' and refreshing. Love it; it's spring and 'love's in the air.' You captured that idea beautifully. Have a great weekend, hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara. I'm delighted to read your comments and sorry for the delay in doing so.
Date: 3/29/2024 1:35:00 PM
Quite a romantic sonnet Lin, seems love is in the air. Hope you're well. Tom
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Date: 4/2/2024 8:06:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. I'm ok, just haven't had an interest in writing lately.

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