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Breaking of the Drought

T’was dry the spring with thunderstorms that rumbled across dry; most every day was under sun or star filled sky, the grass had burnt off early; hay mowed this year was scarce, closed paddocks saved the milkers where grass was becoming less. December, way too early for the drying of the cows. Fodder’s never been this low between a sea of dandelion gold flowers. There’s another hint of thunderstorms with the darkening of the sky; air feels more close and humid than the creek now nearly dry. From eerie still the wind picked up; gusting from the west. Tree tops whirled and circled; dark clouds tumble to infest. The heavens shook the windows; lit time and time again. The tin roof brought a smile with tinkling spots of rain. Rain, oh glorious rain - how long has it been now? Too long is the answer; this refresh too late somehow. Pools soon full; drains they filled; there’s running rivulets. Those pastel colours darken - the countryside all wets. All night long the rain poured down with amazing scenes at dawn. The creek has become an ocean; water hides the homestead lawn. The milking shed is flooded; the milkers herd on higher ground. The border collie’s turning nasty when the cows won’t come on down. Morning milking’s back to winter; an unusual summer cool. After months of dust and flies, cows shiver in a muddy pool. There’s now the signs of worry toward the rising of the creek, with the rain still falling, the water hasn’t reached its peak. Rain - that needed rain. Now the prayer is for respite, as water pours to where it wants, reaching a dangerous height. With the homestead under siege there grows a worried frown; this will be a sleepless night moving cattle up to higher ground. With the milkers on the hills, they must stand in the rain. Their backs are facing to the west from where the rain has came. Calves tended in the bush block, where shelter is the most. For the springers with the bull a threatened paddock is their host. Help has arrived to ease the pain; this disaster’s out of order. There is no time to weep or cry as the home fills up with water. Evacuate becomes the call, for lost is all defence. The farming signs as they move out are top strands upon the fence. Neighbours gather at the school; heartbroken to their fates resolve. Sit and talk together, hope their problems can be solved. There’s a hand around the shoulders where emotion’s pouring out, as they listen to the rain with the breaking of the drought.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 9/26/2021 4:46:00 AM
Wonderfully written, Lindsay: Love the line about the tin roof with tinkling spots of rain. So many times I waited to hear those myself. Sad that Nature can overcompensate at times. Have missed being on the Soup but no matter what it is always good to read your work. Best, SuZ
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Date: 9/30/2021 11:21:00 PM
Hello Suzanne ... we've had a lot of rain yesterday and there is some flooding but not in town. Sometimes up north, parts up north inland become inland lakes and water has nowhere to drain - thank you Suzanne - Lindsay
Date: 9/19/2021 6:19:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... a great comment indeed Jennifer. Africa, like us are subject to severe droughts and I have lived through three of them. One lasted ten years, but the rains that followed caused just as much devastation. Who would want to be a farmer - thanks once again Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 9/16/2021 11:55:00 AM
What happened sad, it breaks ones heart, when water represents life but often with it death - torrential rain, incessantly falling, all too late then more devastation as everything is flooded homesteads too, only life and limb matters now - what a beauty but devastating! This happened in South Africa three years ago as a drought of two and a half years shattered the Western Cape - fortunately no floods afterwards, just heaven sent rain. I applaud your Poems Lindsay. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/12/2021 7:39:00 PM
Your poem kept me riveted to the end, Lindsay. One can almost feel the relief when the rains finally came, before it slowly turned into horror, disappointment and disaster. Climate change is very concerning.
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Date: 9/19/2021 6:04:00 PM
Hello Evelyn ... there is always a chance for us to be in drought, flood, or forest fires that drop embers on how house and that means up all night with a garden hose, but floods leave a horrible mess behind after subsiding - thank you Evelyn - Lindsay
Date: 9/11/2021 4:41:00 PM
This is a sad but very powerful poem from you, Lindsay. We are in very strange times. Here in Utah, they say one more year of this drought will really kill us!! I feel for the farmers and for all of us who will suffer when their farms cannot produce. keep up your golden pen, Lindsay.
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:36:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... drought is horrible. It slowly strangles the life out of everything. I have seen wheat crops withered in the paddocks that go as far as you can see. Any disaster is soul destroying though - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 9/11/2021 4:22:00 PM
Sad, the loss one experiences from flooding; you never can tell. It seems either a drought or a deluge; how to be happy when there is water, when you're under it? Well penned of this experience.
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:31:00 PM
Hello M.L. ... oh yes, a flood is heartbreaking indeed. What it destroys remains to be cleaned up as well as mud etc. infiltrating everything. Thank you for commenting M.L. - Lindsay
Date: 9/11/2021 3:32:00 AM
Wow this is so powerful Lindsay it really reached me. Well done :)
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:28:00 PM
Hello Heidi ... thank you for your encouraging comment Heidi - Lindsay
Date: 9/10/2021 5:39:00 PM
sadly I think this is the shape of things to come , nature is so unpredictable but these events seem to be occurring on an all too frequent rate:-( hugs Jan x
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:26:00 PM
Hello Jan ... I know climate change is being blamed, this is a strong possibility, but it could be a cycle that the earth goes through similar to ice ages - thanks Jan - Lindsay
Date: 9/10/2021 1:20:00 PM
Lindsay, your skillfully-written poem vividly describes the extremes of nature. Very moving. Janice
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:23:00 PM
Hello Janice ... thank you Janice. Yes, the extremes of nature can be heart breaking indeed - thank you Janice - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2021 11:20:00 PM
As always exceptional verse here Lindsay. The description is perfect and I can see it all in my mind's eye as I read. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:20:00 PM
Hello Judy ... no matter what weather disaster occurs, they are so soul destroying. A flood leaves a real mess - thank you Judy - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2021 5:20:00 PM
Great verse, Lindsay. We are experiencing drought here in Colorado. We all pray for life-sustaining rain. Bob H
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2021 6:17:00 PM
Hello Bob ... thank you. I pity you. Lived through a ten year drought when we lived in the Mallee. They nearly sap the life out of you - catch you soon Bob - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2021 1:33:00 PM
Great write Lindsay, splendidly done!
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:15:00 PM
Hello Gordon ... hope all is well with you. Thank you for your fine comment Gordon - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2021 11:29:00 AM
A very timely piece for USA weather, with blazing fires in the west whilst the East is under water! Enjoyed, Lindsay!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/12/2021 6:13:00 PM
Hello Rico ... fire we know full well about, but tornadoes are a rarity and cyclones occur way up north and far away, but don't think for a second that we miss them - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2021 10:28:00 AM
The weather can be so unpredictable at times, we all need a bit of rain but not a flood. Tom
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:10:00 PM
Hello Tom ... flood, fire, and drought are very predictable down here, and they all can be severe - thank you Tom - Lindsay
Date: 9/5/2021 6:33:00 PM
WOW!
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Date: 9/12/2021 6:07:00 PM
Hello Shirley ... thanks for reading this verse Shirley. The earth appears to be heading into weather phenomena at this present time - thanks Shirley - Lindsay

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