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Brain Quakes

The entire world starts to shake, uncontrollable every which way A terrible event, first one ever, eyes unfocused, body quivers Balance banished toward the floor, clenched teeth blood bitten tongue Ground no memory anymore, though said my body looked possessed Guttural sounds in escaped breath, foaming mouth dripping lips Time escaped no measurements, choking on life itself Finally the quaking stops, eyes open in unknown blurriness Body weightless drifting above, fingers and toes clenched in claws Wracked with multiple after shocks, confused about what it was Paramedics arrived in 911, rushed in an emergency red lights above Thoughts thinking but unable to recall, waiting alone in hospital rooms Wheeled down into this room that holds a large tunnel white tomb Feeling that death loomed, sometime very, very way too soon My 40 year first seizure, my 40 year brain cancer the news All my lifes luck used when I heard days later, benign tumor And still running on that same luck today... 12/29/18 For Contest: Brain Brevity

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Date: 12/30/2018 3:26:00 PM
gosh, i looked down and saw this actually happened to you for real.That is very scary, Brian. I do hope your luck does not run out. LIke Jan said, I think your imagey was great. IT brought us right in!
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/30/2018 8:11:00 PM
Scary is an understatement, thank you Andrea
Date: 12/29/2018 3:15:00 PM
such vivid imagery, I got chills reading your poem Brian as I know others who have had tumours and their experiences are so similar. good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Davey
Date: 12/29/2018 4:59:00 PM
Thank you it was a very lovely feeling of helplessness

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