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Box 4

BOX (4) I let the voice recognize the box but it sits opposite me chewing my echo. I stare around. I am inside it. The echo bounces against its walls piercing my ear like an earring. My voice giggles into tears and stands here stuck, to remind me that the box is stifling me the more I grow inside it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/26/2016 4:30:00 PM
Vanja, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 1:52:00 PM
Vanja, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/9/2013 6:47:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! Light & Love
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Date: 1/8/2013 7:00:00 AM
Hi there and welcome to the site, I hope you enjoy it here.
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Date: 1/7/2013 3:34:00 PM
I like the imagery-- The echo bounces against its walls piercing my ear like an earring nicely done.... nice to meet you!
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Date: 1/7/2013 12:23:00 PM
Vanja, welcome to P-Soup. - You write very well. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your thoughts and poems here with us. - Happy new year. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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