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Bond Between Woman and Soul

tantalizing me at midnight, i see not what you see in me- lost in a labyrinth of plight, may i be free from the life I ONCE KNEW… i wrangle with demons, struggle, hoping love could shine- needing what isn’t given, feeding on what isn’t living i ask questions to the gods… why is the depth of fear unbearable? (replies of metaphors and riddles of a conundrum) i give way to the madness and endure all the sadness i await the darkness; his raven ceases an aria of my light, breaking the bond between woman and soul- my fate had no warning as i wandered into fields of barren umber grass, protected by few yet loved by many; not remembering who they are and why 3.27.20

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Date: 3/28/2020 11:58:00 AM
Tantalizing title that drew me into the wrestling match between soul and demons and past and future. I resonate with your line "needing what isn’t given". The sadness and vulnerability are evident, but there's a lovely kernel in the soil, "protected by few yet loved by many". My Captcha right now says "ART" and that's what this is, Laura. Congrats and hugs ~ John
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:50:00 PM
aww thanks, you made my day...be blessed :)
Date: 3/27/2020 9:41:00 PM
beautiful musing from beautiful you :) I am so behind on reading and writing but glad to see a couple knew ones from you tonight... hugs :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:50:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra, once and awhile :)
Date: 3/27/2020 5:19:00 PM
Great last verse LuLoo...
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:50:00 PM
many thanks sweet man :)
Date: 3/27/2020 1:18:00 PM
You give an whole new meaning to, "a trip to the Loo!" Aloha! Rico
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Lu Loo
Date: 4/11/2020 1:50:00 PM
lol thank you

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