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Blue Lagoon

Blue lagoon Gulp air icy waters inviting Fight the vicious current Bursting lungs hasten your powerful struggle Past the point of no return, you swim or die Through waters haze - the light of candles Isle of Capri Blue lagoon 08/06/2014 Choose your favourite body contest Sponsor , Andrea Dietrich

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/9/2014 1:02:00 AM

Love it Darren ! Isle of Capri reminds me of Gracie Fields song my parents used to play. hugs as ever Jan xxxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 1:11:00 PM

Good afternoon Darren, I miss the soup, and the few friends I've made here these past few weeks... :) I love this body of water, The imagery is kind of romantic, even though it might end in death... enjoyed...Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 1:06:00 PM

double soup mail....