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Blue Jay

bright blue sapphire blinks bejeweled midst blue spruce bush ... blur blueberry sky 14 March 2022 Bird Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Howmanysyllables syllable counter

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/9/2022 10:01:00 AM

Very pretty! I like the vibrant blue imagery in this poem. Well done! Congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/30/2022 6:36:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/29/2022 1:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A Lovely/Colorful write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Eve Roper

Date: 3/28/2022 9:31:00 PM

Great imagery, Christuraj, congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2022 9:16:00 PM

wowie, SO good this is. I just love the alliteration. Gonna fave this one!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2022 11:46:00 AM

Alliteration and the color 'blue' have made quite an impact in this blue jay poem, Christuraj! Congratulation son your fine win. ~ Regards // paul

Howard Kerr

Date: 3/28/2022 1:15:00 AM

Well done, Christuraj. Excellent in every respect. Howard

Len Gasun

Date: 3/28/2022 12:50:00 AM

Wow! This is wonderful haiku with alliteration about one of the prettiest bird my dear friend. Big Congratulations on this awesome write and win. Thanks for sharing. Hugs