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Blue Flame

Dancing on the coals It curls its ribbon of blue Hypnotic wonder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/2/2010 5:12:00 PM
This is such an excellent haiku. It's like being in India and watching a guru dancing on the hot coals. The imagery is just awesome. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/2/2010 1:33:00 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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Date: 7/2/2010 10:10:00 AM
ohh,, cool write ,, nice..P.D.
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