Blue

Oxygen like Love Often taken for granted Lack one of the two Face the harsh reality You will soon be turning blue Joe Incatasciato Contest- Blue

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Joe. Love, Carol

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/22/2011 6:56:00 AM

Hey Joe! Adding a tint of humour gives this even more colour depth. Congratulations again, on this piece that I hadn't seen. Must mean that I should take more time reviewing the contests. You rock, Joe!! Love, Mikki

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2011 9:02:00 PM

Congratulating.. Joe, nice... thanks for sharing... have a nice one...p.d.

Margeret Bailey

Date: 2/12/2011 7:58:00 PM

Interesting write.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/11/2011 5:33:00 PM

a comic take how original Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 2/11/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your big win in this contest!Wonderful Tanka !--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 7:42:00 AM

Congrats Joe on your super win in the blue contest with this awesome piece and terrific entry luv.. enjoy..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2011 10:16:00 PM

Aha, the very clever one appears!! Congratulations, JOE! Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/10/2011 7:50:00 PM

This sure read like a winner. many congratulations dear friend.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/10/2011 7:03:00 PM

Way to go, Joe. I thought I had commented on this one earlier, but apparently not. Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest.

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2011 3:37:00 PM

Congratulations Joe, on your honored placement. Agape, Moses

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/10/2011 2:07:00 PM

Wow! This is really impressive. This comparison seems so simple; but there are so many complexities when it comes to love oxygen. We definitely need both to live and breathe. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France

Date: 2/10/2011 1:54:00 PM

So true Joe, no air means blue very soon, you have a wonderful sense of humour shown in many of your poems, congrats on your win~~

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/10/2011 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win in Francine's "Blue" Contest, Joe! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2011 12:14:00 PM

So pleased to see your poem in the winners' circle, Joe. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/10/2011 12:08:00 PM

Hi Joe - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/10/2011 11:08:00 AM

Hello Joe, Congratulations on your win. I loved this, it made me LOL Very Witty As Always, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/10/2011 10:50:00 AM

Very witty tanka & I really like that last line, Joe! Enjoyed reading your take on the challenge -- Congras on your win :D

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/10/2011 10:26:00 AM

congrats on your 8th place in the contest Joelove the double meaning in the last line

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2011 9:52:00 AM

Works really well Joe. Good luck in contest

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/10/2011 7:09:00 AM

A super take on this colour. Love the flow and imagery.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/9/2011 4:16:00 PM

I could detect a nice humor in the write with beautiful use of the word blue, Joe

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/9/2011 3:30:00 PM

Strong analogy penned here with such a clear message and thought... Best of luck to you in the contest...Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/9/2011 9:32:00 AM

What a great analogy, Joe. Oxygen is not in short supply, but when we live without love, we are certainly "turning blue." One of the best entries I've read for the contest and I'm hoping to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 2/9/2011 6:08:00 AM

simply beautiful