Blooming

An instant of sublime pleasure And the seed of mine Gentle as a spring flower Blooms within the girl of mine. It is the miracle of nature The human adventure Repeating over and over Blooming of flowers Within girls as mine. I’m going to be a father She’s going to be a mother. My seed within her Is the flower Of eternal love Just blooming. …….. A long lasting pleasure And an instant of hot thrill And the seed of boy of mine Gentle as a spring flower Blooms within the body of mine. It is the miracle of nature The human adventure Repeating over and over Blooming of flowers Within girls as me From seeds of boys as mine. I’m going to be a mother He’s going to be a father. His seed within me Is the flower Of eternal love Just blooming.

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Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 8/31/2014 7:01:00 AM

Interesting write.

Mario De Paz
Date: 9/1/2014 5:43:00 AM

Thanks for visiting Ndaba

Leon Enriquez

Date: 8/20/2014 10:19:00 PM

Dear Mario: Lovely write. Hope all is well with you. All the best then, Leon

Mario De Paz
Date: 8/29/2014 8:35:00 AM

Thank you for the positive comment, Leon, After vacations I will visit your nice poems

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/14/2014 7:40:00 AM

Ah something difrent now. Well oh my, a marvelous poem on mothering and fathering, planting seeds and gardening and babes as delicate as flowers. Wow! Soo nice to read u again poet mario. Cheers.

Mario De Paz
Date: 8/29/2014 8:34:00 AM

It is so kind of you this comment. My vacation with no internet made me answer late, Cheers

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/9/2014 12:28:00 PM

- Mario, it's been so long since I've read something from you .... I forgot how beautiful you are writing - This is truly a beautiful poem! - (Congratulations with "the flower") - Thank you! - Wish you a nice summer. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz
Date: 8/29/2014 8:45:00 AM

I really feel the way I have written although people sometimes forgets what sex means! Thank you for lovely words.