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Bloodbath In the Bog

"Bloodbath in the Bog"
Bloodbath in the Bog Leeches go down hard on turtles fattened egos in a feeding frenzy agitated mosquitoes land on the slime to take a taste grinning hares race each other out the gates wasting life and time smoking the green grass eating all the pretty flowers (LadyLabyrinth/2020)
"Edible Flowers" / Finn Brothers https://youtu.be/UY8xoSERti4
“But looks can be deceptive and that sweet looking field can be a dangerous man eater. The meadow is actually a peat bog- more specifically a blanket bog - and while it's a rich habitat for wildlife watchers, it hides potential dangers for the unwary.” English colloquialism/Bog.

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Date: 1/10/2020 11:13:00 AM
Delicious lines, your imagery and creativity are royal sisters. Nice reading from the pen of your mind. Happy 2020.
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Date: 1/12/2020 3:05:00 AM
I can't stand bullying or negative non-constructive criticism of other people. Thank you Funom for your comment and kind wishes for 2020. May you have a happy and successful 2020 and all the best with endeavours in all your writing projects. Leanne
Date: 1/4/2020 2:53:00 PM
Loving it LL...it might look beautiful but there are many leeches underneath the surface xx
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Date: 1/4/2020 3:17:00 PM
Ta Schmidt. Lovin' this E.E. Cummings poem. https://poets.org/poem/cambridge-ladies-who-live-furnished-souls

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