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Blood Red Mind

Cursed Madness and Blood Red Mind Mine to carry Mine to Mind Careful now you just don't know they Dare to Tread Another Blow This Quiet Violence never ends it waits for me my Silent Friend It makes me Strong... it makes me Wrong it puts an end to my Heart's Song Just One Memory, just one more Unlocks the Horrors and Picks the Sore They never hear my Screaming Mind Haunting me from Deep Inside I feel the Storm Rush through my Veins Blowing in Forgotten Pain as Blood runs thick behind my Eyes this Mask of Silence my Disguise These only Words Save me Tonight so Desperate now I Frantic Write And Time Again I must Beware the Trembling Stillness of Blood Red Stare and Stronger still my Focus Fixed my One Laid Burden is of this... Cursed Madness and Blood Red Mind Mine to Carry... Mine to Mind

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Date: 10/6/2016 11:52:00 PM
An emotive piece very effectively expressed. You drew me into the darkness. Bravo!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 10/10/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for the great comments...glad you enjoyed my scary side!
Date: 10/4/2016 2:57:00 PM
Chris, I don't think I have this darker side, though I enjoy reading and writing dark things from time to time. WEll done!! And I sure hope you are only exaggerating. keep on loving DOVE chocolates.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 10/6/2016 2:34:00 PM
Well we do take creative liberty with poetry, but lets just say my memories are dangerous to my sanity...so glad I have my writing to vent it out...and Dove chocolate!:)
Date: 6/29/2016 11:28:00 PM
DArk and passionate writing, Chris. you were in the mood of Poe!!
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Chris Hagy
Date: 7/1/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...I can be an emotional poet...guess there is some womanhood in me!
Date: 4/2/2016 10:01:00 PM
Nice write. Had darker times too.
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Chris Hagy
Date: 7/1/2016 6:42:00 PM
Thanks Tom...hope times are brighter now:)

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