Blood Moon

Appearance like Blood, Your beauty washes over me like a flood. Truly Mesmerizing, Watching you before the sun climbs over the horizon, This occurrence is really surprising. Even tho your emergence is brief, Your display has brought me relief. But time is drawing to a close, with that I must bid you goodbye, Thank you for this speechless show.

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Carol Eastman

Date: 7/18/2016 10:13:00 AM

I am always sooo impressed by the meteorite storms... They've come so far... to end here... at our door.

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/26/2016 2:54:00 PM

Me as well it's fantastic! -Love Ettie

John Fleming

Date: 11/6/2015 10:48:00 AM

Very nicely put together, Ettie. My best regards! :) john

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/11/2015 11:15:00 AM

Thanks John....God Bless-Love Ettie

J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/25/2014 7:12:00 PM

:D Remarkable verse. - J. W. M. Earnings A well deserved 7, friend of mine...

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 12/10/2014 9:58:00 AM

Thank you!-love Ettie

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 11/14/2014 12:25:00 PM

Excellent write about one of my favorite muses - Lady Moon! I love her in all her wonderful appearances, blood red, orange, yellow, silver, blue, etc. all lovely and mysterious! Warmest regards. Pandita

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 12/10/2014 9:56:00 AM

Thank you Pandtia(Lovely name by the way) for your nice kind words:)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/10/2014 6:41:00 PM

Nice poem - but I believe you should have used another word instead of "speechless" in the last line. I could be wrong of course but I wanted to give you a little feedback. Have you ever been to a poetry workshop? I have - and found it valuable. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/12/2014 10:52:00 AM

Thank you for the feedback Matthew:)....I could have used another word but I didnt want to cause I liked how the word went with the poem:)......No Ive never been to a poetry workshop.....But it sounds like something I would love to try:)

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/18/2014 7:13:00 PM

Brief beauty endures beyond a glimpse of curious taste Ettie. I love meeting others who invest time and energy in recognizing natural beauty, the marvels of inconspicuous oddities. Your visit to my work made me happy Ettie...J.A.B.

Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 10/30/2014 11:56:00 AM

Well it was my pleasure to read your work:) Thank you for reading mine-Love Etrie