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I once knew a girl who lived far away, Who told me a fairy tale one sunny day, We would be friends for evermore, I would never be shown the door, I called her my friend but she wouldn’t stay, The story is over the finish less than gay, The fact is my life has been put in disarray, Best friends an oath she swore, But that doesn’t count anymore, The pain I feel will end soon I hope and pray,

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 11/25/2018 12:15:00 AM

Oh! pain in blocking love! /// lovely limerick

Tim Smith

Date: 12/31/2014 6:51:00 AM

Loving and heartfelt Shane...here's to brighter days....cheers

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/1/2015 3:50:00 AM

Hi Tim Thank for your comment. Tomorrow is always a new day and I am still standing and writing

Jan Allison

Date: 12/31/2014 2:14:00 AM

Oh Shane beautifully penned but so sad my friend:-( Here's to a happy and brighter 2015 for us both:-) Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/1/2015 6:47:00 AM

I hope brighter days are around the corner for us both - I am pretty new to poetry only been writing since February but it has changed my life oh so much! :-) Hugs Jan x

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/1/2015 3:54:00 AM

I suppose you don't see a lot of sad Limericks but I needed to get it out and after reading all the Limericks you had written this year and some research this was the best I could do

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/30/2014 9:32:00 PM

Well written pen Shane! A 7 from me! I wish you very Happy New Year and yours! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D."

Shane Cooper
Date: 12/30/2014 9:50:00 PM

Thanks Dorian, First time i have written a limerick since i was a child. Happy new year to you yours also. Love <3 Shane xxx