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Blinded By Life and Praying To Truly See

Blinded By Life And Praying To Truly See Hold that thought, the world desperately needs you not just your skin your deeper schemes nor love that hath quietly fled your stealthy grasp This loss, this aching scrapes the brittle bones tears apart your soul seeps into your midnight bed breaks your feet swallows your vanity and then vomits bricks of aspirations to be not a fool but race horses and fly kites remember nobody forgives you for your running away to the circus and watching all the clowns eye to eye finally able to see true life once more. Robert J. Lindley, free verse 8-07-2023

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Date: 8/7/2023 10:46:00 AM
- A bit gloomy but great writing, it reminds us that life does not last forever, Robert - hugs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/7/2023 1:12:00 PM
Thank you, my friend. Life gives and it takes, we must understand both parts. In our youth we oft fail to understand. I know I did and that failure led to many heart ache poems from my pen. God bless.
Date: 8/7/2023 10:37:00 AM
Wow! This is so different for you that I wouldn't have guessed you wrote it. I like it. Met some really nice Philipino gals at a convention this weekend. Made me think of you and your loss
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/7/2023 1:10:00 PM
Yes my friend, itis quite different. I wanted to try this form to see if I could gift a good poem using it. And yes, the filipina ladies are nice and most are pretty. Thanks for the fav my friend. God bless you.
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Tom Woody
Date: 8/7/2023 12:42:00 PM
Fave

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