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Blazing Star

Beyond the night I see a light that shines from a distant shore. A light so bright across this black night that I cannot ignore. A blazing star so far away that sends a sweet dream to me. Beyond this night I feel the fire that burns incessantly. Across tempest waters rife with fear she calls to me - come yonder. With trembling lips I try to speak - my spirit stills, to ponder. My eyes now closed to darkness, as my voice screams back her name. My spirit weeps for what I must leave, my heart for all its gain. written 07.07.2016

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Date: 11/13/2016 6:43:00 PM
Well Written :)
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Date: 7/12/2016 9:21:00 AM
you are like me (in response to what you said down here to me). I often do not know how a poem will end up either.
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Date: 7/8/2016 6:15:00 PM
Sad one, but beautiful poem.
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Francis J Grasso
Date: 7/11/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I had the first line in my head for a while before the rest finally came out. Many times I don't have a clue where that first line will lead me. Sometimes I will finish and the poem will be completely different from what I imagined. But this write is where I did want to go.

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