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1. A dangerous vision coveting another, blurred by envy to need a mental monocle. she burns in such deadly blast not to realize the soul already promulgate itself to the better one. Nothing can serve as a wake up call to warn against the penalty point. What was once a silent partner in thoughts transform to wicked acts and a stench not to be overlooked, wanting a friend to be less. 2. Sees up through her friend both are fine, she wants to be finer both are well, she wants to be better a onetime dove becomes arrogantly disloyal a part-time energy with flashlights relevant to the downfall of another, exhibiting abrupt vagaries, playing billiards not even to win but to break the board, watching closely in a bad timing to revert all positives with negatives. 3. In the flowing dam of our love, you poured strong acids of your crude emotions. you are the one downgrading your worth to a bric-a-brac your unexplained anger proves the more that I’m by far better. On this affliction, you stay rat-arsed, giving jealousy so much importance to be obsequious to it. Time to be matey with the envied has passed, let this dark heat continue fighting for the devil may care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/2/2018 4:22:00 PM
Love this poem!! Very well-written..:) Will be reading a few more poems or lyrics from you today. -JWE
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Date: 3/25/2018 10:53:00 AM
very well put .
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Date: 9/19/2017 10:31:00 PM
I like the contrasting, leaping images line/line, Funom...nicely done
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:17:00 AM
Thank you so much James... Its been a while. Happy new year
Date: 9/15/2017 10:24:00 AM
An excellent deep write.. hope you are well my brother..
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:17:00 AM
Yes, I am. Its been a while. Happy new year brother
Date: 9/2/2017 8:12:00 PM
"the daevil may care" ... after june ...
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:16:00 AM
hahahaha... Yeah! Thank you so much pipping stars
Date: 8/23/2017 12:55:00 AM
Just beautiful my friend...just beautiful...god bless...
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. Its been a while. Happy new year
Date: 8/13/2017 6:21:00 AM
Funom, your hurt bares it's soul in this one. A pen of tears turns to a pen of indifference brought on by the nagging, never ending pain. I sense there is a healing ink waiting. My best to you, chuck
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Chuck... You just said it all
Date: 8/11/2017 9:41:00 AM
Powerful poetry, deep and to the point..awesome...
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Harry
Date: 8/10/2017 9:25:00 AM
The made me wonder more than i should - about personal matters - and wondering if wounds will ever heal -
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:14:00 AM
Yeah.... This is an excellent perspective of this poem.. Thank you so much for 4 exhibiting the broadness of your mind Verlecia
Date: 8/9/2017 9:57:00 PM
A very powerful, passionate read; you write with such an electrical charged passion; well done.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:13:00 AM
WOOOOW! Thank you so much Kiser
Date: 8/5/2017 8:39:00 AM
"you poured...", fabulous line. I like these three very distinct poems, and the passions that they stir.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Scott
Date: 7/31/2017 8:24:00 PM
Riveting! very intense! Love it Good read thanks James
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2018 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much James

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