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Black Hole

Black hole Even attempting to write about black hole A vacant remained in the mind before write How would be that gorgeous black Than other matter immatter of my globe Heard, it is so deep and dense Does not let even pass to light What will happen If I write a letter!! Him,addressing black hole the great Will he send an messenger to me addressing (? ) or accepting what Then how could I be reach there And how to hope, hand shake with him!!! How will I be drawn into his sphere? Difficult to imagine to stand before How would I see him with this natural eyes Or he will provide me immaterial eyes! Decision I wove in mind forget to go there This earth with lives of millions is better far At least day night equals according to season As stress and distress are its lovely ornaments My globe the earth a grand gracious:---

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Date: 6/1/2016 1:53:00 PM
John, thank you very much for reading my poem black hole. To write about the universe is very hard not to crack still love and attraction towards her sometimes scribbles appears . Again thank you very much for kind words.
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Date: 5/31/2016 1:51:00 PM
A difficult subject when trying to write about the mysteries of a Black Hole. You made a good attempt of it, Deepak. Pleased to make your acquaintance! My best regards. :) john P.s A seven for a good effort!
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Date: 5/24/2016 2:49:00 PM
Yes, Sandra, Sometimes I love to think about the universe and when I go through it, puts me in so puzzling that I cannot explain my wonder and desires to surrender Almighty the God. He is all in all resource of all I believe. Thank you very much for friendship.
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Date: 5/24/2016 9:21:00 AM
Hello, Deepak, your poem's title drew me in to read your write. I too am fascinated with all aspects of our universe and especially black holes. It is difficult to imagine for sure. I enjoyed your poem very much. Sandra
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