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Bitter Journey Home

Chewing garlic in the evening helps a sore throat. Garlic will not kill a rat. The sun kills, shining against the eye; it is both enemy and friend. There is enmity between the sun and man. Beams dance by the window sill and sparkle like rain against old wood. The old man leaves the house to visit the grave of his late wife. His grizzled hair and foul breath blows like a trumpet. He prays to the sun god, but receives no answer, only a bitter taste of resignation. A rat crosses his path like some demon. He throws a front kick, then totters, tripping on a vine as he moves along. The vine is a snake of green and brown, twisted, gnarled like a calloused palm. Soon he must head home. It is evening and the day is dimming like a short wick. The old man is dim of mind and feeble. His limbs carry many wounds like thorns. Surely sleep will restore his memory. Surely he will find his way home.

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Date: 12/25/2020 5:00:00 PM
This is one helluva read. Amazing work!
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Date: 12/22/2020 8:16:00 AM
Really like this poem Bill. Images abound. Thanks for sharing............peace!
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Date: 3/3/2015 4:27:00 AM
Tortuous path for the old..nice write Bill...Peter
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Date: 2/24/2015 5:22:00 PM
Aging is indeed a difficult process. But all of us must go there. Very thought provoking.
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Date: 2/20/2015 12:47:00 PM
Powerful write....ah...to get to that place...is so hard. The aging process....saps the joy from the soul. I found the first stanza so intriguing...the garlic bit. People consume lots of garlic in this part of the world, but it doesn't go well with me! ;) ..Thanks for sharing.
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Bill Yates
Date: 2/20/2015 12:53:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for your comment.
Date: 2/20/2015 8:57:00 AM
Much Meaning deep in :) Love This - Jenny -
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Bill Yates
Date: 2/20/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thanks.

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