Bipolar

Bipolar heart, a tempestuous dance, Love's embrace, a fleeting chance. God's presence, a guiding light, In darkness, a beacon shining bright. Emotions swirl, like a stormy sea, Yet within the chaos, I find clarity. Bipolar me, a tapestry of light and shade, Navigating life's path, unafraid.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/26/2024 2:41:00 PM

a revelatory poem about some of the intricacies of living with bipolar disorder. I liked "emotions swirl like a story sea..." well said and accurate. Appreciate you sharing a bit about yourself. Enjoyed the read, Sara

Deb M

Date: 1/26/2024 10:39:00 AM

Beautifully said and written Jay! Love the last line especially…..it says it all and good on you! Debx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/26/2024 10:35:00 AM

Hello JayNarain, There are many people that suffer from this illness. they are on medication for it. Blessings my fdriend. /Darlene/

Ink Empress

Date: 1/26/2024 9:59:00 AM

“ Yet within the chaos, I find clarity” that line stood out for me. I always have so much respect for individuals speaking and writing on mental health illness’s which many think is not ok to reveal: i loved how you’ve delivered this. Sending you light

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/26/2024 9:54:00 AM

Jay, this is beautiful and hopeful! A positive take on bipolar. Blessings!