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Beyond the paint, I hear the lilt of a violin string stirring, lazy and languid creeping through a lowly god’s veins. His ichor flows and foams with the sound of sea on white beaches, while siren’s song dirges, calling sailors to dance. thump thump thumping the beat of volta do mar The notes rise from greenlight to gray to midnight crescendo. Black chords of piano wild and wanton loud, and dark; it seems a sailor’s death is imminent. But, sound shifts sudden; ocean waves calm. The sirens fail. A life is spared as violin plays. Silver notes drift. Beyond the paint, a void in cobalt blue awaits— thump thump thumping A hypnotic tune of life and death is played anew. After: Blue and Green Music - Georgia O'Keeffe 1921 07 January 2016 For Debbie Guzzi's Challenge: Ten Pictures, Ten Poems, Ten Days - Painting 1

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Date: 1/15/2016 8:41:00 PM
Lovely, sensual... great stuff. Glad I stopped by your page.
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:50:00 PM
- This is art, dear Kim ! - I had not found a single line in this painting - (I think of green salad ..... sorry :) - Your words sing ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/10/2016 6:50:00 PM
Kim, you have penned a truly bright gem with this composition. Congrats on it being chosen by Debbie for painting number one. I too, am amazed at her insight, sage advice an editing abilities! YOUR POEM SHINES EVER SO BRIGHTLY MY FRIEND!
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Date: 1/8/2016 4:40:00 PM
G'day Kim... I read, re-read, and re-read again Kim. Golly, this poem of yours is great - well done - Lindsay
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:49:00 PM
Very good, Kim, love the imagery of words you have chose for the painting. I love the picture the fine soften curves and the brilliant color blending. But it would be very difficult for me to write because I'm not an abstract person; I am very concrete :(
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Date: 1/7/2016 6:58:00 PM
excellent write Kim, this is wonderful
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Date: 1/7/2016 3:30:00 PM
Kim, this is amazing. And on that note you sent me on the blue/green challenge, it's something I would never try. I would not even be able to produce ONE like this, (not the kind of poetry that Deb likes with surreal images, etc) Also I need to write on various topics each day, not the same one times ten. Anyway, it was sweet of you to contact me!!
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:50:00 PM
Thank you so much for checking out my entry, Andie. This is a learning experience for me and I'm glad that Debbie liked it. I have now posted her edited version. About the 10 poems, each day she will post a different painting, so there will be a variation in the topic. Interesting enough to keep my neurons active but would keep me from entering any other contest for the meantime. :-) hugs
Date: 1/7/2016 11:28:00 AM
wonderful interpretation Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:56:00 AM
Well done on a very lovely and creative write, Kim! When I saw that picture all I could see was cold, cool tranquility; you went way beyond that! ~ Regards & hugs // paul
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Date: 1/7/2016 9:56:00 AM
in the sea of Life....you will encounter pain, you will know strife....but what will keep you strong....is like a poem, the heart's song....and kim, your song always tops the chart....I am a true fan, I Love your art....;)
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:20:00 AM
impressed, ohhh my, kim... your images burst with such lifting strains...wow!.. huggs
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:27:00 AM
Great write Kim.. Love how the music rose and fell like the waves in an unbroken melody...best wishes
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for the read and support Joseph. This is a learning experience for me. I have now included Debbie's edited version. Kim

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