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Beyond My Mind

Blue or green? The color of the sea, Going up and down the waves, To be my unexpected mood, Sweet or sour the feeling of me. The question of my mind hitting it through the divine, The passion of art inside a deep mind, With full of imaginations, Hitting me through left and right. Perspective comes along with me, Seeing it in my mind, Looking at the blank paper, My emotions run down the pages, Forgetting my visions along, Looking down on paper, Loosing my focus , Is getting hard to draw. Speaking with my wild heart wide open, Thinking of the world we live in today, Standing amongst the people not knowing what to say, Hearing the music flowing into my ears, Beating myself inside these walls of hate, Wanting my eyes to cry with full of tears, Hating to be on this earth, Seeing people fade away, Sinking through lies in my face, Stabbing me in the back when I need them the most, Seeing people with unwanted faith through their eyes, Anger comes my way, Looking down at the world with full of questions in my head, Going crazy with frustration and confusion of me questioning God, Deep inside my heart is burning with poison, Is breaking me apart like glass, At peace without a path in mind, Falling down somewhere here that I never belong, I'm not perfect yet, I like to lead not to follow others. Life is like a tree that grows inside me, Leafs on the tree come and go like people in my life, Taking the road of life, Things can change in a minute, When I look away, My goals would fade away, Going back letting noting stand on my way, Trying harder to focus on my goals, Looking around with a smile on, Reaching my goals slowly without a distraction.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/4/2009 1:36:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing poem making semi's!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/26/2009 5:00:00 PM
I just wanted to drop in and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Shirin. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2009 7:25:00 AM
Wonderful Imageries, emotional lines... Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you Shirin! Adeleke
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:53:00 PM
Shirin, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 8:01:00 PM
Congrats Shirin on your poem "Beyond My Mind" being featured. Vince
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Date: 7/8/2009 6:44:00 AM
The emotion comes through your words. Nice use of similie. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Shirin. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:30:00 PM
My friend, what a great display of talent you have here. Congratulations on being featured. Ernilando
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:24:00 PM
You have a beautiful flow with this one I floated through it ... congrates on spotlight Love Jayne x
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Date: 5/14/2009 4:13:00 AM
re-visit! love the "stream-of -thoughts" flowing like honey! well done!!! Jim
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Date: 5/12/2009 4:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem! Art is a great way to express the experiences i go through in life. I love it so much! -Alley
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Date: 5/8/2009 7:33:00 PM
Shirin, what great expressions of honest life you have expressed....truly a free verse!!! I love the way this poem "lets loose!" great write! Jim
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