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Betor's Jack

Whinny Winey on the track The coluber bravoing at his back The betor keen on his kale Here goes the whistle Spectators applauded Round the clock Whinny Winey to the finish line potted the betor's jack.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/12/2011 7:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2011 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!--------Lori
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Date: 9/12/2011 2:28:00 PM
Swairik, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem "Betor's Jack" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/12/2011 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Swairik. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2011 4:25:00 AM
hey Swairik congrats on your win..David
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:53:00 AM
A 6th place congratulations my friend for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:52:00 AM
congrats Swairik on top ten win with this great Alliteration poetry luv..
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