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Beside the Sea

Beside the sea i wait~ the dreamy dawn to shine and paint horizon's hue in tawny, taupe and teal unveiling vivid view. Beside the sea I wait~ the early birds in flight arching like tiara making sky a painting of placid aurora. Beside the sea I wait~ the whisper of the breeze soaring as sunshine sings her stellar symphony reviving lost musings. Beside the sea I wait~ the crashing of the waves sparkling like sunlit snow as they return to shore my love will, too, I know. 9 April 2022 Form M- Monchielle- New Poem Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Theme: 4. sea/ocean Rhymes checked at rhymezones.com Syllables checked at howmanysyllables.com

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Les Pick

Date: 10/24/2022 7:44:00 PM

Thanks JCB for sharing this picturesque poem. A nice read.

Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2022 3:29:00 PM

JCB, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance

Len Gasun

Date: 4/16/2022 10:46:00 PM

Splendid poem and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on your win and this superb monchielle poem! Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/16/2022 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2022 4:21:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2022 9:34:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on this new win. I love your "Beside the sea" write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Terry Miller

Date: 4/15/2022 12:41:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine poem and a well-deserved win.

Valsa George

Date: 4/14/2022 10:22:00 PM

I missed seeing this as poem of the day ! Now let me convey my double congratulations on your excellent win and the POTD

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/14/2022 10:12:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD and your win:) I love this one:)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/14/2022 9:40:00 PM

Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/14/2022 8:33:00 PM

Congratulations, again!

Ken Rone

Date: 4/12/2022 8:24:00 AM

This is a wonderful piece in a challenging format. I wish you the best in the contest. - Ken

Anil Deo

Date: 4/10/2022 7:54:00 PM

JCBB, congrats. I take it as good advice from your poem: "Beside the sea, I wait."

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/10/2022 7:13:00 PM

This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic, so soft and serene. Your thoughts whisper along the page with such elegance and grace. I'm drifting in these tender moments. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 10:00:00 PM

Thank you Brandy...That's what I feel as I write this poem. More blessings to you.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/10/2022 6:35:00 PM

So happy to see you hold the POTD for today! The comparison between sea and love is soothing. Perfect read for Palm Sunday! Pangie

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 9:59:00 PM

Thank you Pangie..

Eve Roper

Date: 4/10/2022 5:27:00 PM

great painting, JCB, congratulations on POTD. Blessings my friend

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 9:56:00 PM

Thank you dear Eve. More blessing to you.

Debra L Brown

Date: 4/10/2022 1:11:00 PM

Beautifully penned, Congrats on POTD. Blessings ~ Debra

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:13:00 PM

Thank you Debra.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 4/10/2022 12:01:00 PM

Wonderful POTD! "Beside the sea I wait" your imagery fascinating! :)Paulette

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Paulette.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 4/10/2022 10:28:00 AM

Congrats for your POTD.

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:10:00 PM

Thanks much!!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/10/2022 10:25:00 AM

So glad to see this as POTD, happy to return with congratulations!

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:09:00 PM

Thank you again Michelle.

Bill Baker

Date: 4/10/2022 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD, JCB, and good luck in the contest! Bill

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:09:00 PM

Thank you Bill.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/10/2022 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A beautiful sea write. I am walking in the sand with the birds flying over head. Have a great/blessed day....................

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:08:00 PM

Thank you Paula. That moment is so sublime!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/10/2022 8:13:00 AM

Wow! "Beside the sea I wait" - Beautiful! Congratulations!

Jcb Brul
Date: 4/10/2022 1:07:00 PM

Thanks you so much.