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poem edited 11th December; for some reason the opening line had gone missing??!!

The bell rang once, a faint tingle; clear, sharp in the cold, numbing air yet strangely muffled in the mist. All heard it, the distant, single; ting, behind the droning prayer. Though not a soul among their midst affirmed each other that they heard. The rope slid by black-gloved fingers while the casket heavily sunk, The vicar’s final mournful word hangs above them all and lingers; another ding, a thudding clunk. Eyes quickly turn towards each other others stare towards the ringing sound. Disturbed unkindness ravens crow above a grave; Elsie’s brother interred beneath this Holy ground; some twenty-seven years ago!

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Date: 12/11/2023 8:08:00 PM
Wow.... this is so beautiful. The sound of a death knell has resurfaced in your memory paving way to a stream of sad thoughts. Great entry for the contest. All the best Terry.
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Date: 12/8/2023 7:31:00 AM
i like this, it has a vibe of john betjeman about it..many thanks for your comment on my work :)
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Date: 12/1/2023 7:32:00 PM
Wow. You did great work in this contest
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Date: 11/30/2023 7:00:00 PM
What a story/write. Good Luck... Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 11/30/2023 6:47:00 PM
That's Scary, do you mean the ting of a bell was coming from his grave ? Hmmm food for thought in this one Terry. A very interesting read. Best wishes Wen
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