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Begging and Pleading

What is wrong with you? Don't you see I miss you so My thoughts are racing Baby please say something! Don't leave me like this...

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Rhoda Galgiani

Date: 11/10/2016 5:00:00 PM

Hmmmm, first reaction if this is fact... I don't think so! One can think what they want, but I wouldn't say this as I am assuming to a man? But, I am much older than you and probably see things differently. Doesn't mean you are a bad writer, just...to each their own :0) ...rg

Rhoda Galgiani
Date: 11/12/2016 9:34:00 AM

Yeahhhhhhh - that a girl!!! :0) ...rg

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/10/2016 5:13:00 PM

Lol noo Rhoda I would beg nobody neither... I was actually thinking something that happened to me 2 weeks ago on my voicemail someone left me... I would never beg NNNNNOOOOOO! not my Forte... Thanks for the feed back Rhoda...