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Before I Fall

Most mornings are mundane a routine struggle to present a pumped up state of affairs to an already exasperated air [but this time it's different] soft breezes blow across my pillow brushing smiles upon my skin my eyes have been awakened as comfort keeps crawling in sun kisses dangle off my prism and for once I can finally breathe hopeful happens upon reason drifting in every gaze you see don't change past imperfections splashed about your walls life's too short for wasting just catch me before I fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/7/2018 10:16:00 PM
"just catch me before I fall" That can have so many meanings. Yet, one lingers in my mind. Such vivid images you paint with your words. This is so beautiful. ~ Brandy
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Date: 7/7/2018 9:17:00 PM
Tim, another beautifully penned treasure. You certainly have continued to sharpen your pen over the years!
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Date: 7/7/2018 10:30:00 AM
Right to the faves jar. <3
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Date: 7/7/2018 7:48:00 AM
Very nice Tim. I can understand completely. :)
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Date: 7/7/2018 6:11:00 AM
- Every morning we should think," life's too short for wasting" ... lovely poem, Tim :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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