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yellow and black buzz ing yellow and black b uzzi ng yello w a nd blac k bu zzing y ellow and black buzzi ng yellow and black b uzz ing yell ow a nd blac k bu zzing y ellow and black buzzi ng yellow and black b are attracted to flowers are attracted to flowers are at tracte d to flowers are attracte d to f lower s are attracted to flowe rs are attracted to flow most people swat at them most people swat at them most p eople s wat at them m ost people swa t at t hem m ost people swat at them most people swat at them P.R.Deremer

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Date: 10/24/2020 10:04:00 AM
Superb structural poem. Enjoyed the read. So creative. Brian
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Date: 10/16/2015 4:22:00 PM
Pam I did not understand all the buzz and the fuzz..... good luck
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Pam Deremer
Date: 10/16/2015 4:48:00 PM
It is a Haiku poem in the letters that spell BEE. The first letter repeats the short line of " Yellow and black buzzing" which is part of a picture of a bee. The next letter says "attracted to flowers." The 3rd letter says " most people swat at them." on each letter I just kept repeating the statement for that letter. If you follow each letter you will see that each word is there. Does that help?
Date: 10/6/2015 3:50:00 PM
Love it! so cute! :)
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Date: 10/5/2015 9:13:00 PM
Dear Pam I adore your style and form concept, it's just a fabulous outstanding form bravo, and thanks for your comment of worry, but I'm a tough old gal not that old but right now I feel anicent, lol cheri
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:53:00 PM
this is so creative. i like this new style you have going on here. 7++
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Pam Deremer
Date: 9/29/2015 1:58:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 9/29/2015 11:24:00 AM
unasll diffrent like your poem thankyou for your kind words on mine fate poem which is a revised version of an old write i have not been on here for last eight months so not chance to write much david scottxx
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Pam Deremer
Date: 9/29/2015 12:15:00 PM
Thank you for reading my work.
Date: 9/29/2015 6:43:00 AM
Pam that's really cool, love the way you've set it out. Thanks for the review of my poem, Dave
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Pam Deremer
Date: 9/29/2015 12:14:00 PM
Thank you for your comment.
Date: 9/28/2015 5:28:00 PM
Dear Pam Clever and creative, love the BEE design, simply wonderful, amazing I'm going to read a few more of yours, and thanks for the review of mine also, cheri
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Pam Deremer
Date: 9/28/2015 7:28:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/25/2015 12:21:00 AM
Pam, you are so creative and amazing! Pat
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Pam Deremer
Date: 9/25/2015 11:12:00 AM
Thank you so much!

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