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Beauty Within

One cool day while at church up in the balcony one man was perched With tears in his eyes the man began to cry "Tell me oh Lord Please tell me why" " Why am I so ugly with this hunched back" Screaming, "Tell me oh Lord" as he began his attack The Lord softly said fulfilling him with grace "Why you're the best looking hunch back in this whole place" "If everyone looked the same it really wouldn't matter for it's the beauty within to which people are flattered" Remember, we are all beautiful people and come from places doesn't matter what language we speak or the color of our faces...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/23/2010 3:37:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem and liked the humor a lot. "Best looking etc..." Puts it all in the proper place.
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:33:00 PM
love this one , nice with the message, at times i need to be reminded, lol, a real cool small story,..p.d
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Date: 5/23/2010 3:24:00 PM
So much wisdom in this clever poem, Edward. Beauty is in the heart and a blessing from God that can't be judged through physical appearances. Enjoyed your poem! Best wishes for the contest, Carolyn
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