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Beauty of Nature

soft nest in woodlands a baby fawn under mom life untouched renews Poems by Shar Form: haiku 5/7/5 For Linda-Marie's contest "Beauty of Nature"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Linda-Marie's "Beauty Of Nature" contest Shar. Sorry for the belated congratulations but much going on at this time. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:29:00 PM

Sharon , a wonderful congratulations :-) in Linda's "BEAUTY OF NATURE" contest.. have yourself a good one* xox~PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2012 6:48:00 AM

pure delight, sagron... congrats on your fine!..) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:50:00 AM

Sharon congrats on your great win....David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2012 12:14:00 AM

Very nicely done, Sharon. Congrats in the Beauty of Nature contest.

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 3:46:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Sharon. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/11/2012 11:07:00 AM

CONGRATS SHAR ON A FABULOUS ENTRY AND 9TH PLACE WIN LUV..

Tanya Harrington

Date: 8/7/2012 3:17:00 PM

Lovely, I love nature and wildlife, you captured both. :) Tanya

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2012 3:14:00 PM

Great one for Linda's contest..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..My husband had spinal surgery on Friday..He had spinal stenosis which was causing back pain, down the leg pain, and weakness in trying to walk..Thanks for stopping by my work...Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 8/4/2012 1:14:00 PM

This is wonderful Haiku about Nature. Good luck, Sharon.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/4/2012 11:19:00 AM

the visual you create is astounding, sha... greeeat 'ku!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2012 8:20:00 PM

this is fantastic!! I love this picture.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/4/2012 10:32:00 AM

Thankyou Andrea for stopping by and always leaving such a nice message. Hope you have a lovely weekend..............Smiles

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/3/2012 7:02:00 PM

Loving your Haiku Sharon, I am seeing a nice woodland picture. Thanks for your comments and visit. One love. Joy Wells.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 7:23:00 PM

Thank you Joe for reading me today and leaving such a nice message. Looking forward to being here again and enjoying your lovely poetry... Smiles

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/3/2012 5:59:00 PM

you need to gramatically join 2 of the lines- a baby fawn/nests under its mother--sunrise [line 3 needs to be another sensory bit of input that is happening at the same moment] everything must be objective Light & Love

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 6:58:00 PM

Hello Debbie, how are you hon? Hope all is well.....Thank you for your critique ...... Love , Shar

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/3/2012 4:38:00 PM

This is a truly beautiful piece, truly beautiful! I really enjoyed reading the comfort within this write, a well written poem Shar! I love this fabulous piece! Great Work!!

Ingibo Benson

Date: 8/3/2012 3:52:00 PM

Precise poem, with lovely imagery.

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 3:57:00 PM

Thank you for reading me today and leaving such a nice message....Come back again Ingibo when you feel like it...........Smiles

David Williams

Date: 8/3/2012 3:23:00 PM

Shar, I like this image a lot, good luck..david

Sharon Ruebel
Date: 8/3/2012 3:25:00 PM

Thank you dear David, your words are always so kind and up lifting......................Smiles