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Beautiful Womb

Salty breezes blow Wafting through my hair Ocean is heaven Its smell, sound and air Thrilling my senses. The creatures there All lovely souls Even the sharks As I have heard. They just want Lives of peace Deep in seas. Watch them Love them Please.

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Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 11/2/2018 4:03:00 PM

Lovely poem.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/5/2018 9:31:00 AM

Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2018 1:30:00 AM

Love the sharks! Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I am still pondering the goodness in you for even thinking this!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/1/2018 3:11:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2018 7:39:00 PM

Sadly humans are making it difficult for the other beings. A well expressed sentiment.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/1/2018 3:10:00 PM

Thanks Richard.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/28/2018 4:41:00 PM

You take us into the dark where even there you wish for peace!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/29/2018 9:08:00 AM

It's a beautiful place, the sea; I hate losing so many species because of toxins and oil spills. The beauty of the ocean is so astounding; if I lived among them; I'd want peace and clean waters. Thanks again.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/25/2018 10:12:00 PM

Great message, ML.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/26/2018 7:09:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Silent One

Date: 10/25/2018 5:11:00 PM

Lovely poem.. I agree..

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/25/2018 5:49:00 PM

Thanks so much, I'm glad.