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Beautiful

Never allow dreams to drift off in smoke
For dreamers wishes come wrapped up in hope.Quote - Poet’s own
Beneath a silvery starry night
Two lovers swoon in intense delight
You and me in my beautiful dreams
Creating magic beneath moon beams.

Blessed in splendour of the glitzy night
Wrapped in loving arms our hearts ignite
Sharing kisses from soft velvet lips
Away we drift in spiralling flips. 

Every tender, rapturous caress
Is music to my soul, I confess
A taste of how heavenly it'd be
Sharing this love for eternity.

We dance up close, most seductively
Our hips gyrating impulsively 
A prelude to a magical night
Love in a mystical dreamers tryst.

Never have I loved this way before
My heart has become an open door 
A door only you may enter in
For you have crept underneath my skin.

Your love light outshines each bright star
Perfection to me, is what you are
The music, the whispers whilst dancing 
All I crave is in your romancing.

Wish the vision would stay forever
In this dreamland of never, never
A simulated reality 
In sleeps screen movie of ecstasy.

Desire you, need you, love you dearly
I couldn’t live on if you should leave me
Though you only visit in a dream
In beautiful dreams I am your queen.

Copyright © Beryl Edmonds | Year Posted 2023

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Constance La France Date: 9/10/2023 11:55:00 PM Belle, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image, Constance Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/11/2023 12:39:00 AM Thank you Constance, it was a pleasure to take part in the contest… Belle

Christuraj Alex Date: 8/26/2023 9:25:00 PM Great writing. The last lines are very grand. Congratulations! Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/27/2023 12:52:00 AM Thank you Christuraj, very much appreciated… Belle

Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/26/2023 2:24:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote/picture. I enjoyed it. Have a great day............. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/26/2023 3:17:00 PM Thank you Paula. Have a great day too… Belle

Christina Bowring Date: 8/24/2023 11:49:00 PM So, so romantic Belle. Flows beautifully with intense passion. I loved it! Thank you for sharing. Keep dreaming …… Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/26/2023 9:55:00 AM Thank you so much Christina, I’m so pleased you loved the read. I will dream on… Belle

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/23/2023 7:12:00 AM Belle, this vividly descriptive, ultra-romantic, lovely piece GOT ME at the end. Janice Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2023 11:49:00 AM Thank you Janice for reading and delightful comments… Belle

Lin Lane Date: 8/23/2023 5:07:00 AM “Love is a mystical dreamers tryst.” Oh indeed it is, Belle. Your honeyed words are as beautifully written as any love could be. Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2023 6:11:00 AM Thank you for that Lin, very appreciated… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/23/2023 5:00:00 AM - Beautiful and romantic, Belle ... a dream poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2023 6:09:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise, Hugs in return. Belle :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 8/22/2023 11:25:00 PM Oozing with romance and passion Belle, so well written. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're both well. Tom Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2023 12:24:00 AM Thank you Tom, your words mean a lot, it makes the writing so worthwhile, it’s started my day off with a smile. We’re both well, hope you and yours are too… Belle

Sotto Poet Date: 8/22/2023 6:42:00 PM It was a great pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Belle. Your eloquent lines are like a delicately woven tapestry. Your captivating diction perfectly captures the harmonious interplay of vibrant thoughts deep within your poetic talent. BOL is in the contest" Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/23/2023 12:20:00 AM Thank you so much Sotto, it was a great pleasure’s to read your comments first thing this morning, I’m pleased and honoured by your words, most encouraging… Belle

Yann Rolland Date: 8/22/2023 5:12:00 PM such a lovely declaration, has to be listened, thanks Login to Reply Beryl Edmonds Date: 8/22/2023 5:20:00 PM Thank you very much much Yann… Belle