Bear

Bear A pair of bears together Gather in for a cuddle A bear with a pear And a bear with a ladle One real and one not One eats and one not A still life and a life, the pair Both giving a bear hug forever.

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Barry Stebbings

Date: 8/29/2017 1:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Georgiana. Cute visual piece. // Barry.

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:13:00 PM

Your pet tiger seems cute too. Kudos to you too!

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/29/2017 10:52:00 AM

Cuddly good feeling, congratulations Georgianna...

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:14:00 PM

I just love my bear hugs. Thanks :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 8/29/2017 7:32:00 AM

I love the riddle-like take in your work! Congrats Georgiana, for your well-deserved second placement in the contest!! ;-)

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:28:00 PM

I'm speechless and really happy. Thank you so much for liking it!

Anita Harris

Date: 8/28/2017 9:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest placement!

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:29:00 PM

Thanks Anita!

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/28/2017 7:27:00 PM

Great one, Georgina - I really enjoyed this! Congrats on the win! :-)

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:31:00 PM

I'm really happy you did. Thanks, Gregory!

Roy Pett

Date: 8/28/2017 5:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Georgiana, such a lovely poem. :))

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:31:00 PM

Aww, that's so lovely of you. Thank you so much, Roy.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2017 5:20:00 PM

Cute, Georgiana. Care bears!!!

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:35:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. ^^ I can't bear their cuteness too

Dean Wood

Date: 8/28/2017 3:20:00 PM

A pair of bears, a bear and a pear, a . . . oh I can't keep up! Congratulations Georgiana!

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:33:00 PM

Your piece was so funny and cute! I certainly didn't expect the porcupine to evolve!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/28/2017 3:16:00 PM

Adorable, Georgiana--Congrats on your win. Janice

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:36:00 PM

Thanks for congratulating me, Janice.

John Leong

Date: 8/26/2017 3:35:00 AM

that was nice! i actually visualised a children's story book with pictures, with bears! cheers! :)

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 9/23/2017 12:37:00 PM

:3 I feel proud that it could make you imagine the scenario. Thanks a lot.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/19/2017 6:42:00 PM

This is so sweet. I can picture it. I can also relate to it. I have bear go through my yard :)

Georgiana Elisha
Date: 8/19/2017 7:07:00 PM

Haha, that's a funny pun there! Nice, Heidi