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Bath For Two

B lindfolded he leads her down the hall, A nticipation makes her start to giggle. T here he lets her dress slide slipping to the floor, H anding her a red rose he removes the blindfold. F ascination shows in her excited face, O ver the floor is a carpet of rose petals, R ed candles have turned the washroom into a spa. T he scent of perfumed water fills their senses, W ater spills as he draws her into the tub. O ne heart and one soul become one. Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 10.04.2014 Regina Riddles Contest: Romantic Acrostic 1st place win

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Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 5:20:00 PM

Loved it Brenda, well done and congrats on top place

Faye Gibson

Date: 10/9/2014 6:34:00 PM

Brenda, this is just great; love it. Congratulations.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/9/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thanks Faye.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/9/2014 6:21:00 AM

Enjoyed this romantic write, Brenda. congrats on the win,

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/9/2014 6:50:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Mehta.

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/8/2014 10:11:00 PM

utterly romantic, Brenda! love it! Congratulations!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/9/2014 6:51:00 PM

Thanks so much Hija

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 10/8/2014 9:48:00 PM

What a romantic husband you describe. She is one lucky lady. Congratulations on your fine poem, Brenda.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/9/2014 6:52:00 PM

Thanks Reason.

Abdul Malik

Date: 10/8/2014 6:56:00 PM

I am so glad to see you way up there. Many congrats. Nice write.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/9/2014 6:53:00 PM

Thanks for the kind words Abdul .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 3:42:00 PM

oh yes, I do remember THIS one. So romantic. Congrats on your great win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/9/2014 6:54:00 PM

Thank you Andrea.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 1:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your magnificent win.

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Maurice .

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/8/2014 1:15:00 PM

Very romantic. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Joyce

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/8/2014 1:01:00 PM

Hi Brenda, Nice little story and a solid win. Congratulations. Take care. Earl

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 1:55:00 PM

Thanks Earl.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/8/2014 12:07:00 PM

Oh lord, why couldn't it be me..lol. This is SO romantic. Congrats and enjoy your big win. BG

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 1:54:00 PM

Thanks Barbara. :-).

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/8/2014 11:12:00 AM

Brenda -- such a romantic poem! Congratulations on your 1st place win! Sandra

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Sandra.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/8/2014 10:42:00 AM

Congratulations and I enjoyed your poem. God bless you with love and prayers, Thanks for entering ~ Love, Gina

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 11:42:00 AM

Thank you so much for this beautiful honor Regina.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 10:42:00 AM

we share the podiummmmmmmmmmmm congrats my friend:-) hugs jan xxxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/8/2014 11:43:00 AM

:-). Thanks Jan, I'm so happy to hear this.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2014 8:46:00 AM

Ahhhh Brenda.....you are a true romantic at heart! Lovely and seductive acrostic; much enjoyed. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/8/2014 3:53:00 PM

...back with congratulations...a merited first place!!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/6/2014 8:50:00 PM

Thank you for your comment Paul.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/5/2014 12:49:00 PM

- Oh ... could happily taken me a romantic bath for two ..... thanks for a romantic and beautiful poem Brenda - Enjoy reading it! - (Lovely photo) - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 4:03:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/5/2014 11:15:00 AM

oozing with sweet flow of romance, Brenda... you really set the mood; lovely!...huggs

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:49:00 PM

Thanks Nette. Now that we are all in the mood? Now what?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 12:35:00 AM

OOPs sorry I called you Regina. I just realized that I had glance up at the poem and saw where you wrote regina's name as the sponsor of this contest you were writing for. That's why I wrote that!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2014 12:34:00 AM

ohhh, Regina. you have indeed showed us sexy AND romantic. A very good poem from you!!!

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 10/5/2014 12:47:00 PM

That's Ok Casarah, OOPS. Andrea. Just kidding I have Made the same mistake. Glad you like it.