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Bass Man Bob

Across the dance hall floor he taps and plays all day. How goes his music score? Just watch the dancers sway. He taps and plays all day like a bumblebee that hovers. Just watch the dancers sway to music for new lovers. Like a bumblebee that hovers Jake spins his gal around. To music for new lovers Bob plucks a thrumming sound. Jake spins his gal around. How goes his music score? Bob plucks a thrumming sound across the dance hall floor. Pantoum Poetry Form

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Date: 9/6/2022 3:49:00 PM
very cool pantoum there, Carol. short and sweet too, just how I like them.
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Date: 8/31/2022 11:49:00 PM
Love the this form, Carol, and the poetry that fits like a glove..Very special indeed.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 9/1/2022 1:05:00 AM
Thanks, Harry. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 8/29/2022 4:26:00 PM
This is a great Patoum, Carol! I hope you entered the contest.
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Carol Louise Moon
Date: 8/30/2022 2:57:00 PM
Thank you, Ann. I did.. so we can both keep our fingers crossed.

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