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Bardenesque

these clouds dangling about the moon tinged with the pearlescent glow of a fading sun have my thoughts twirling in my mind awakening memories i slip away into the darkness of eventide eyes closed wondering if it's you touching me through this muggy air as i twist this crimped up hair half kept atop my head i can hear the thrum of whispers and old guitars in faded love songs now beckoning me to sing along like a teenager plumb crazy in love i succumb once again to your touch the tang of your lips lingers on mine as this wind pauses between gusts memories erupt thrusting forward like a feral cat into darkness claws drawn against bare skin leaving me breathless like this howling wind the clouds drift as my eyes open glowing like this moon april 13, 2021 Eight word Bardenesque challenge Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 6/8/2021 12:40:00 PM
Lady - I got lost in this...you're a rare talent - I love your mind - you truly don't know what a very special writer you are every time you pick up a pen!
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Date: 5/1/2021 7:11:00 AM
This leaves me breathless like the wind blowing through the trees. Congrats on your win, Sandy. Hugs, John
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Date: 4/19/2021 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So glad to see you here and with a wonderful write/win. "Very Creative" Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 4/18/2021 4:39:00 PM
A magnificent write in your inimitable style congrats Sandy on a great win!
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Date: 4/14/2021 10:59:00 AM
- A pleasure to see you, Sandra :) - Your poem leaving me breathless ... wonderful :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Hope you are well :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2021 8:08:00 AM
This is beautiful - so glorious. Raging with passion and heated impressions. I so love it... it's thrilling and gentle all at once... a breathless breath of warmth. I love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/14/2021 7:40:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful...just like I remember. This one felt so good to read my friend, it has been a while since I have read something new from you and it did not disappoint. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 4/13/2021 11:48:00 PM
Oh I am so glad to see your poem and if was just chance really because I feel lousy these days. You composed a poem with special way in a brilliant way and hope it will rate high. You write with such a flair and I loved your poem. Victor
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/14/2021 4:15:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, sorry to hear you are not feeling well these days...good to hear from you...i will stop by and read more after my morning work shift... hugs
Date: 4/13/2021 6:54:00 PM
WoW! Sandra, You took the chosen words and composed a lovely romantic write. Although it is a “ Bardensque” write, your signature style is evident in this well-written write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day. Welcome back:-) Alexis
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/14/2021 4:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis... i come from time to time and look for inspiration from contests, my muse decided to sing for this one... hoping to keep her going, thanks for your kind words...i will be back to visit your poetry in a couple hours after my morning shift... hugs
Date: 4/13/2021 3:15:00 PM
I am so happy to see you back, Sandy. Enjoyed your signature write, though this time it is in Bardenesque style. So lovely to wander in your romantic verses and be amid the clouds ogling the moon.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2021 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay... my muse felt like singing today, whether she will keep singing i don't know but i am hoping... good to see your kind reply... hugs
Date: 4/13/2021 12:49:00 PM
Quite a romantic verse Sandra, lovely to see you back, I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Sandra Adams
Date: 4/13/2021 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Tom... came on to respond to some soup mail peeked and the contests and gave it a go... been many months since my muse gave me anything... I am good, staying as safe as i can... hope the same is true for you........hugs

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