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Bamboo

Standing straight and tall, I am happy among my next of kin, graceful and gracious, accepting and at one with nature. The gentle whisper of the wind is music in our midst, A cornucopia of chirping sounds, gleeful gifts from the birds. Do you ever wonder how I have grown at last For it was only six weeks ago that I was not on this spot Yet it would seem that right before your very eyes I suddenly appeared overnight, you were surprised! My story cannot be told without mentioning the farmer. Day after day, year after year he never gave up on me. A powerful testimony of perseverance and trust, and hope and faith in The One Almighty and... the power of a dream. Knowing the value of patience, he waited and cared for me oh so tenderly and never gave up. I dared not ever conceive of disappointing him, so while he gave my needs every day, I did what I had to do... I grew. Not above, but underneath the ground, where no one can see, to build that inner strength, deeply rooted in my seed. One day in the fifth year, the right time came and I literally leaped off the ground. Miracles do abound! I am ever giving. I give food to the hungry, a shelter for the homeless...even a bed. I am seat and a fence. I provide clothing and more. It is my nature to give. From my innermost being I provide freshness in the air. Strong and resilient, I am not cowed by storms They give their all to topple me from where I stand, yet I hold my ground. I may bend and sway for the wind, but after a while I stand, straighten and do not lose my grip. I learned to accept my weakness and be proud of my strength An image of one who is calm, I am at peace with myself. 26 August 2015

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Date: 9/28/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Kim!
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:01:00 PM
gosh, this never won, huh? I remember how much I loved it before. BIG congrats this time, dearie.
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:51:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on a well deserved win:-) Alexis
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kim!
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Date: 9/4/2015 1:13:00 AM
Not only did I enjoy your poem about bamboo Kim, but it also brought back memories on my uses; fishing poles, garden stakes etc; - thanks Kim - Lindsay
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Date: 8/31/2015 12:46:00 AM
Strong and resilient in the midst of hardships, a seed of success. Good luck to you, Kim. 7 (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 8/28/2015 9:34:00 AM
A good read requiring the reader to think as they weave their way through the words. Emile.
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Date: 8/28/2015 12:41:00 AM
I loved this poem, makes me think, I need to find a bamboo gf!!!! :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 8/28/2015 7:31:00 PM
I did mean a woman of such fine qualities as the bamboo, not a bamboo tree!!!!! LOL
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Kp Nunez
Date: 8/28/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks, Arthur! You do? Just holler and we can check out some for you...I doubt if they'd do well in the cold climate of Canada, though. :-)
Date: 8/27/2015 10:31:00 PM
this is just wonderful, Kim. it's good to see a poem about a tree different from oak or willow!! Actually I was thinking of naming mine for the strongest, oldest tree, but I called it oak before I realized other trees lived even longer than oak! HOpe you do well in the contest. Loved the part about the cornucopia of chirping sounds!
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Date: 8/27/2015 1:24:00 PM
Very nice my dear Kim!I love that Bamboo tree, the freshness it brings, remembering my childhood days :D..Best of Luck!
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:42:00 PM
Such a lovely personification of the bamboo tree, Kim. So much imagery and feeling! I so enjoyed your wonderful poem. I have a bamboo plant in my home which is one of my favorites. All the best for the contest! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/27/2015 11:41:00 AM
I enjoy the bamboo, plus the imagery here... I love how you compared your wonderfulself to the flow and stretch of the bamboo. You are freshness herself... Above and under, you gave us so much amazing imagery in every line... A perfect 10 poem... LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2015 5:07:00 AM
I find that you truly know the meaning of resilience dear poet in this write....and your praise to your creator is vivid and appreciative...I enjoyed this personification Kim! Have a wonderful week....much love, james.....missed ya
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Kp Nunez
Date: 8/27/2015 7:04:00 AM
Hey James...long time! Thanks a lot. Yes, I heard it too, and I googled your query...it says the flowering happens every 65 to every 130 years. Amazing discovery even for me. Missed ya too. hugs!
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James Peranteau
Date: 8/27/2015 5:09:00 AM
P.S....is it true that Bamboo only flowers every one hundred years....I heard that when I was a bit the younger soul?
Date: 8/27/2015 3:46:00 AM
Kim, very nice shot and weeeeee I am glad that you make one that is so within the Philippines.. =') love your personification! always well-written.. =')~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:30:00 AM
This is simply a gorgeous poem... so brilliant!!! It carries a valuable message too. We can learn from the bamboo! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:36:00 PM
A lovely personification of something so vital to your country, and an educational piece, too. Terrific write, Kim, and good luck. Viv x
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Date: 8/26/2015 3:52:00 PM
kim, the bamboo was one of my choices for the tree challenge as it is very filipino... but seeing how you wrote this elegantly, i am glad i went for another one... amazing pen!.. huggs
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:13:00 PM
I did not know it took 5 years for bamboo to grow above the ground. A sturdy and giving tree. nice Kim
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Kp Nunez
Date: 8/26/2015 1:18:00 PM
This is the giant bamboo, Tim...the one planted to be harvested. Definitely not the garden variety where you plant a sapling and it only takes 60 days to take root and grow new leaves. Thanks for leaving an observation. Kim
Date: 8/26/2015 12:28:00 PM
Fantastic write, Kim. This really acquaints the reader with the resilience of this tree. You have painted a lovely picture. Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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