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Balance the System

Gathering four elements of life sustaining the earth, People keep on killing our natural resources, Start planting trees to balance the flow of ecosystem.

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Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/7/2014 12:41:00 PM

Hi Aiyah, My friend, Once again your kind heart and soul gathers it words and speaks to us. Much needed I must say:~) Great write.Thank you for sharing~ Peace, Deborah

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/6/2014 11:18:00 PM

Great message for humanity, AIyah. Most people don't seem to know that we're killing the only planet that can ever sustain life. Also, a very good write for the contest!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 7:18:00 AM

wew!! ,,this is so nice to see... You made me smile today, pareng Jake!!.. :O)) buti na lang..medyo natumbok ko.. hehe... I'm afraid to enter it in nette's contest.. pkease tell me if there's still need to change or improve here... :O)) thanks for dropping by though...^__^

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2014 5:56:00 PM

A very good suggestion to all mankind! HEy, I have your chicken soup results at my blog. Yours is a good one.

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 7:14:00 AM

Oh my G!!! ..I'm so excited to see the result!!! .. Ooops! before I forgot.. Thank you for visiting my treasure land so often.. Love and hugs!!! ^_^

Casarah Nance

Date: 5/6/2014 4:57:00 PM

We plant trees every year :) balance is good :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/7/2014 7:11:00 AM

thanks Casarah (nice name!) for a nice thoughts!! ..I appreciate your comment... :O)) oxoxox